Comment on Mr. Rabbit Returns by youvebeenserved
But not really that was very sad What’d his note say?
View ArticleComment on (Health) Freak by youvebeenserved
Be nice to mummy for a while and then ask really nicely to buy good food… Or…. Plant a garden Or.. I don’t know :/
View ArticleComment on OH SHIP! by youvebeenserved
I see what you did there… xD Sad. But I like it. One of my favourites I’d say.
View ArticleComment on Read This Ish by youvebeenserved
Hi I’m Alicia. I have wonderful taste in music and I think you should play some songs for me! - What is Love by Nevershoutnever ( http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sCLGbmpXXPY ) - Chop Suey by System of a...
View ArticleComment on Walk The Line -f by youvebeenserved
Such profanity! :O (I actually didn’t notice until you said something :/ ) But I agree on not calling people stupid just because they don’t know how to do something. Very wise words Mr. Allgoodd
View ArticleComment on Writer’s Greed by youvebeenserved
Absolutely lovely! Wonderful poem! Encore, encore! No seriously though I like this one. Bravo, Allgoodd
View ArticleComment on Enter — New Year! by youvebeenserved
Welcome back once again, Mr. Allgoodd Me gusta Shakespeare. Me gusta mucho. I read Candide It’s really short and an okay read. I don’t know you, but yes you must be a nerd to want to read an Elder...
View ArticleComment on Sonnet of the Future by youvebeenserved
I totally sang this as sort of a song/chant in my head. I guess that means you have good rhythm?
View ArticleComment on Ice and Ticking by youvebeenserved
They don’t rhyme!!! But I guess that’s okay…. And in case some people were confused, these are two separate poems… not just one really random one
View ArticleComment on If I had never written this, it wouldn’t be here. by youvebeenserved
I totez intended to leave a comment earlier…but I guess you don’t care about that I’m so glad you told me what those squiggles meant! I never would have gotten that on my own! Also, I definitely think...
View ArticleComment on Sonnet: Self-Pity by Adult Satires
I was there, but we create our own reality, things fade only if we take the notion to let go… I feel you…
View ArticleComment on Sonnet: Self-Pity by youvebeenserved
Well this person ^ right there decided to not only take my first comment spot, but also make it all deep and stuff…. But, uh, pretty poem
View ArticleComment on Sonnet: Pain by TotezSpiritual
I know how you feel, Broski. I know how you feel.
View ArticleComment on Sonnet of Illogical Circles by youvebeenserved
NIce poem, broski. Very relatable. Oh, and FIRST!
View ArticleComment on Bird Sonnet by dearestanon
You sure do write a lot of poems about Gray Jk. Great poem though, seriously. Also, I’m first
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